grief 2

this image i have redrawn using zeldis's "an pleasant memory". i felt that her image looked as though the person was sadder rather than happy, so i redrew it acording to how i saw it. (i don't think that sentence actually made any sense). Zeldis's looks far better than mine still...
i found the mage easier to draw because i believe it represents how i feel at the moment with everybody i love having moved on to bigger better, perhaps worse in some cases, things and how i feel as though i have just been left behind still waiting...
anyways enough of the emotional crap.
critisism appreciated...